I live here,
And you went
You wrote her story became extinct,
And I been immortal
Slowly caught three of her delicate
fingers;
Thumb, forefinger and middle finger
By then rotated paper values on those
lines,
Making trips to the world of words
Duet those words,
And on your classical dance
Sometimes down, sometimes up
If ever go wandering round
And then in a unique position to stay
Scream occasionally ‘A’ noise,
“C” is, as hot peppers consumed,
Questions of ‘Q’ dictatorship,
And his Shhh.. “S” scares,
But she did not stop writing her story;
As yet, I in you
I live here,
And you went
You wrote her story became extinct,
And I been immortal
Tranquillity, take turns thriller. 🐾
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Beautifully written….👌👍
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Thanks to this beautifully appreciate. 🌿
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Aye for sure. ✌
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Wow – great stuff!
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Thanks a lot dear. 🌿
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Awesome : )
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Thanks! 🙂
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Lovely!!!
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Thankly!!! 😁
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What a mindbending reversal of logic, or something. What a way with words. What a what are you on about? What a magic mystery of poetry. What a penetration of profoundity. What a word heard referred to sound semantics. What,,,,
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And try what you perceive while you write yourself is so good. 🌿
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Just love your style. I love good poetry like T.S. Eliot, Ted Hughes, Dylan Thomas, and you creations seem to have an originality, vitality, wordskill and depth to put you in the same class as these classic poets. And it’s such a cute, pretty, neat, charming, prim and proper way you have with words, or something. Anyhow, I read loads of poetry here and other places, and yours stands way out from the crowd.
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If you T.S. Eliot, Ted Hughes, Dylan Thomas’s poetry is read and compared to them, it is kind of you. Because, indeed, I’m nothing in front of them. But I can definitely say that you have a good sightedness of art. And I’m thankful for your goodness. 🍁
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Lovely ❤
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~ ❤ ~
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Wonderful. Thank you.
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😀
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loved it!!
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Thank it. 🙂
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I should start learning these ethereal skills from you now.
Marvelous.:)
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Really? So when are you coming to learn? 😜 btw.. Thank you from the bottom of heart. 🙂
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I am not moving from my desk. Okay!
You teach me here, like, by commenting upon my posts. 😛
You deserved that compliment. Sometimes I wonder how can girls be this good. I mean they have so many other things to worry about. Then why just this? 😦
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Ahahahh.. Really? Agh..that’s way I don’t need feminism. ✌
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Take it as a complement and nothing more. 😛
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Haha.. Got it. ✌
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Magnificently real… Barbara x
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Thanks.. Barbara. 😊
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Staycey this poem is so tough for me to understand.can you please help?i want to learn your different style of poetry.That is why 🙂
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Actually I ink and pen life is explained. Life? Seriously!!! 😜 Remember that every moment is when you write something from the pen.
What you do not hold the pen with three fingers? And what is not under the pen up or not revolves round whether the values were as dancing.
Lastly, type in pen and ink of the ink turns to look at some fraction of our hands. That’s why wrote there ,”I live here,
And you went
You wrote her story became extinct,
And I been immortal.”
I hope that you will have learned. 😁
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So you mean to say the person who writes something will go after writing(may be you meant death of that person) so you wrote-‘And you went’,then the ink is finished(there is no life for a pen without ink),so you wrote ‘You wrote her story became extinct’.so what remains immortal or forever are the words the person wrote using that pen.Hence you wrote-‘And I been immortal’.Am i even close to the meaning of your poem : P
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Lol..Brilliant, will soon learn. Inking, but the story she wrote. So I wrote, “And I been immortal.” 😛
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You have a complex way of expressing things and i have a simple way.Let us keep it that way.other wise you will get tired of explaining every poem to me : D
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Lol..I’d think, very simple way of writing my poetry and I could not even a good writer. But now think it was just my Fallacy. 😁😜
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Why you said that?
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since i said you will have to explain every poem to me?you write well.see here except me who commented on your poems all said beautiful 🙂 .That is what matter right?you should continue this way of poetry.Do not change it ok?
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And I do not have any problem to explain your. it’s my felicity. 😛
Btw..thanks to this glorify. 🌿
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This is brilliant! Guess i will have to take some classes from stayclassy madame :p
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Our so dare, you teach. 😛 btw..thanks to this appreciation. 🙂
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Oh plz ab sharminda na kren 🙂 u are the madame and i am the noob 😀
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Yeah..I said the same thing.
Noob- a person who is inexperienced in a particular sphere or activity. :D:P
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Ugh i know!! And i am not experienced in any thing. Lets say i was born two days ago 😀
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The impact of past life, perhaps. 😛
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Yeah like had a life in the past. -,-
Well done madame
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I’ve strong sixth sense,I guess. XD
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Yeah and your sixth sense must be humor :p is your head always filled with these things? 😀
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Hahahaah.. God bless you.
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I suspect your hair are grey :p
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-_- And I bet you’re ancient. 😛
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We both agreed i am a new born 😀
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Lol..OK. Be satisfied.
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Come on. Stayclassy 🙂
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Always good.
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Always dignified. 🍁
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I liked this poem a lot. It was very well written. I can’t help thinking the ring finger and little finger were complete slackers, though.
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Haha..However, there is no need of both of them here. Sluggish both is. 😛 thanks for those appreciation. 🙂
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Wonderful piece.
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Thank you dear. 😀
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Can’t see your about page. 🙂 want to know the writer behijc the wonderful piece 🙂
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Haha..Will be revealed soon. 🙂
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You have such a beautifully unique and authentic way of expressing yourself, I love it, what a gift!
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Thanks to those appreciation. 😁 🎶
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This is incredible! I love it so much 🙂
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Thanks a lot. 🙂
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Love your poems. You have won over a new follower. Stay classy.
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Haha..Your big favor. 😀 thanks a lot.:)
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Wonderful 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Nice
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Thanku.
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that was pretty amazing.
and what with Tranquillity, take turns thriller. 🐾
thanks for posting this beauty for us. 🙂
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Um..that’s signature. And I’m thankful your goodness. 🙂
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but, what does that mean?
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Um, This means that peace is always converted to thrill. And When you sit alone in peace, you feel calm, there is the thrill. And can see here I am writing about things that static can not move voluntarily.
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i’m impressed!
I like the idea of that static movement you weave with words. 🙂
keep amusing us.
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I hope that I managed to convince you. 😛 and seriously I’m thankful for your goodness. Keep in touch. :))
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beautiful !
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Thank you 🙂
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You get better and better all the time, gonna have to send some one to stop you, okay… (lol)
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Haha…Yet she will not stop writing her story. Thanks!!! 😀
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Magnificent 🙂
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Thanks ,aditi. :))
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Very nice one… 🙂
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Nice
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Thanks!! 🙂
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Nice.
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Hm…I like the way you think.
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Thank you , Alejandro. 😀
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