Turn round you,
Then go down to come detour
But when I turned around,
As if engaged her as ardour
I envisaged them together,
Ask what their name is;
Natural and Synthetic
Such issues are created,
Are to take the burden of the whole
world as
Gravel or stone
Thorns or their painful prick
Not cry not hold,
And forbid any excuse
By the time you verge the destination
Not until my weary steps,
might not have access to the
wandering Notch
Designed as me,
for the Onus
Tranquillity, take turns thriller. 🐾
This is so thoughtful
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Thank you. 🙂
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Stayclassy mam :p
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I’ll be forever. 😛
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You dream good. :p
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If you are saying, then so be it. 😛 Thanku as usual. 🙂
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ugh. Does your name start with N?
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Ugh..who said? Astrologer? o.O
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I can guess only :p if it could be just 4 letters long name :p
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No! Its five letters. Now gimme hi-fi. 🙋
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But but… One letter or two must be repeating.. I guessed it correct yippeee
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Nah! There is nothing alike. 😛
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Shite! Still i am a winner for trying? :p
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It can be said, but you have to go deeper. Exactly like my poems. 😛 😀
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You could have used a better word than peoms 😀
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thoughtful …
thank you for sharing !!
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Thankful 🙂
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🙂 🙂
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Wow you really have a way with words. That’s not an easy task. All I have to say this time around “You Go Girl”.
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I don’t know how I do thank you for the dithyramb. Glad to listen it. And thanks for encourage me. 💛
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That’s what support is all about.
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Here you have all the nobility. 🙂
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Stacy, this was so thoughtful, deep and well written that the type of mind that has two neurons like mine has no clue what you are writing about. But it sure was well written
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O charly o charly..you’re a nice writer. Actually, I’m Charlie Chaplin fan. And I’ll support their fine words, such as ,”Life is a tragedy when seen in close-up, but a comedy in long-shot.” 🙂
And And I have written about you, such as the two words you told me about.
(He says yourself ,”the thief writer”.
Steal ideas, and molds them
The art of writing.
Careful, open-eyed, wide awake.
May he be intruder,
Which can wreck your thinking.)-
Hope that you like it. 😛 😉
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I sure did like it.
You remembered about being a thief writer….at least one person listen´s to me 😉
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Yeah..That I, who understand the value of words. You said, and I had to explain. 😛 😀
And and thanks to those appreciation. 🙂
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I nominated you for an award https://wwwpalfitness.wordpress.com/2015/10/17/one-lovely-blog-award-2/
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Thanks! 🙂
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So many people say “thoughtful” but I also perceive a wicked humour here in places. Am I wrong?
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Which is exactly what you said- elvish humour. 😛
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Very beautiful.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Beautiful!! 🙂
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Thank you, nimmi. 🙂
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Pleasure is all mine dear! 🙂
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Nice one. Love it.
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Thank you dear. 😀
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stacy this time did you compare the hardship a tyre undergoes while running to that of a human mind?
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First, I want to tell you of my constant writing about things in any way mislead the human psyche is not your place. My aim is just to tell if their feasibility is to maintain the stability of the human mind, why not. Their silence speaks to me and then I’d start writing.
And the point of this post so you do not think some people in this world have come to just the responsibilities to fulfill in any case, whether he meditates course, why not let die. What do you think?
That’s why I wrote this. Hope you liked it.
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sorry to ask-‘First, I want to tell you of my constant writing about things in any way mislead the human psyche is not your place.’Did you mean if i am not able to understand your poem i should not visit your blog?It is just that the english words you use are on a different level.maybe that happened with your constant reading of books or writing.Next time when you explain make it little more simpler.please ok?
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You still have to take my word incorrectly. If you felt bad, so I’m sorry for his audacity. Believe My intention was not to hurt your feelings.
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ok so you were explaining to me about the poem only and i got it completely wrong.That is what you are trying to say right?
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Exactly..I just told you was because of my poetry and writing.
That’s all.
You will not believe me, did not understand poetry. Because mode of writing poems, in which we move, using their bid fate, that is completely different from what.
Once my teacher asked me to explain poetry and I have translated it into Hindi.
Ugh..
And the whole class laughed at me and I was even punished.haha.. Seriously.. That moment was so embarrassing. 😦
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Sorry some bloggers have said like that to me before.That was why the confusion.keep writing 🙂
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Haha.. OK. Thanks for visiting my blog. Next time I tell you simple ways to make sense of my poetry. Will try..
And thanks to tangle in my poems. 😀 keep in touch.
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I love that you wrote a poem about a tire. It was lovely enough for me not to find any deeper meaning in it. Wonderful!!
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Glad to know that you come to appreciate.
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