Empty bit “I”,
A source of quench your thirst “I”
I wish you every tormented breath,
Dry your lips and eyes out of life
You came to me,
When you remember me
You filled me again,
Whenever you need me
Then you’ll leave empty,
And then go after alone
If such is not seen ever before,
And not look back again
You may not realize,
Is choking own my
You do not see that they tear drops,
Which dipped after you try
Dismissal was because I just, your
penury
Tranquillity, take turns thriller. 🐾
Oh, poor bottle.
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Haha..Not bottle poor, poverty is the human in humanity. He’s not up to us, but we rely on them.
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That’s true. I rely on mine every day. 🙂
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We all are protege. Well I like your crunchy posts too. :))
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Reblogged this on Grandtrines .
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Thanks :))
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You never let your user name down :p
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Skills of the crown of the head and how I fell down, let my crown. 😛
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Haha queen of the summer, winters are coming
Care for the crown or the peom you are humming?
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Haha…People change, such as changing seasons here. But in the spirit of my stay so much, as much as my poems here.
Btw..you wrote better than me. 😉
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Haha yeah you always stayclassy :p
Thank you for being humble but you know you write way better 🙂
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Haha..and thanks for your meek too. 🙂
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I wish you were on some social network so I could just nag you all the time
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You are brilliant with words Lady. Love it.
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And you do not miss to appreciate skills. Thanks a lot. 😀
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The theme and writing was good. But, as an honest critic, don’t you think there are grammatical errors?
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may as well. Honestly tell you, so I’ll improve them. What they are? I want to know.. Seriously.
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Rarely do we find people like you who admit it. Glad to see that. But, I fear it’d be quite a difficult thing to point out all the errors on here. Any other way you might know of?
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What is the mistake in believing? Here are just some of my grammatical errors, if I would have believed that I would be killed. 😛
Here you can tell, I have no fear. I’ve come here to learn and I will learn only. :))
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Hey Dear!!
I’m so happy to inform you that, I have nominated you for ‘THE WAKUWAFU AWARD’. So, please feel free to accept this award.
Here are the simple rules:
https://feelingsoulmate.wordpress.com/2015/10/27/its-raining-love/
Keep Shinning!!
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Hey Nimmi!!
Thank you for your glory. :))
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Pleasure is mine to find a friend like you!! 🙂 ❤
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Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Thanks for reblog. :))
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You’re welcome
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This one is lovely…
I’m so glad to inform you that, I have nominated you for ‘THE LIEBESTER AWARD’.
Here are the simple rules:
https://bunnyblogsite.wordpress.com/2015/10/27/liebster-award-wohoo/
Keep Shinning!!
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Thank you so much for your majesty. 😀 glad to find it.
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most welcome
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You are really talented 🙂
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Thanks, sherinsk. :))
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Nice Sharing.
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Thanks dil- khas-si-yari 😛
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Ur Welcome ji.
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Good comment to dilkhaas )
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Hi i just nominated you for an award.. Congrats..
https://aeipril.wordpress.com/2015/10/28/liebster-award-2/
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Thank you my silly world. :)))
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you deserved it 🙂 you are very much welcome
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Ah..your greatness. 💚
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🙂
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Hi nice, lovely blog! come visit me as well
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Thanks for visiting here. 🙂
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Outstanding!!
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Thank you , wwwinsearchofmyself. 🙂
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Nicely addressed !!! 🙂
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Hey beparvaah !! Stayclass21 is in search of herself like u.plz . motivate her.
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life is a” empty bit”like u bt someone feel dt or not.welcome u again.where were u still now.i m waiting urs some written things.
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Haha..thank you dear. मैं भी आपकी दिलकश अदाओं से भरपूर लेखन का इंतजार कर रही थी। 🙂
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Nice one . Thanks for sharing 🙂
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Reblogged this on Kania-Info .
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Who is dt cruel for so lonly feeling, has left ur bottle of heary.
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